Sunday, April 27, 2008

Complete

Under crumpled sheets, he said,
“You are complete. A complete person.”
Not the kind of thing I have heard
Under crumpled sheets,
Incompletely dressed.
He thinks, therefore I am,
I guess.
I should thank him next time,
Under crumpled sheets, preferably,
For thus completing me.

4 comments:

  1. and then .. the link towards the right says ... "View my Complete Profile"

    ... the 'view', from under the crumpled sheets, or standing out in broad daylight; the view, shall always be complete, and in no way, shape or manner could a web screen carry a view of what completeness really is. Indeed it is a Profile, it says, but even so, it could never be complete....

    that, to know, must be experienced.

    that experience, completes.

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  2. how many Suns have you come across under crumpled sheets !!!

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  3. your posts are very very intense as opposed to my ramblings.

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